The monkeys name was Rupert and he has a little sister called stella. they broke into a house. The person who lived there was kevin. he hated monkeys. The monkey saw a computer. He was typing. bgtidriapwo45p po033weki9yv;'[seoi2arft67y6xowo0zq uhy5unpp5p[yuivJFAWWW3T89W5UYRAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. That was the monkey. RRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAA. He through the thing in a strop. Then KEVIN came in ooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooo. Rupert and Stella ran away. oohh oohh aahh aahh. Kevins fish was gone. aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh. This is why Kevin didn’t like monkeys.
The monkey who had a STROP!!!
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Welcome to the wonderful world of blogging Aimée,
I love the way you use a mix of long and short sentences to quickly get us hooked. I like the questions you left unanswered, was the fish eaten?
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Great Blog Aimee, hope you make more Blogs and i’m looking forward to them.
hi Aimee.
awesome blog!!! 🙂
Thanks love your blog too
Aimee cant wait for you to write more blogs.:) 🙂 🙂 😉
Hello Aimee,
Congratulations for publishing your first ever blog! I really enjoyed reading your interpretation of the prompt. I loved the ending which left us guessing whether Stella and Rupert actually ate the fish or not. Make sure you have capital letters for peoples (or monkeys) names and remember that the past tense of throw is threw not through!
I can’t wait to read more blogs from you Aimee.
2 house points
Mrs Addleton