Why monkeys cant be trusted with highly expensive computers!

Posted by Trinity C in 100wc | 6 Comments

There was once a man called Stuart. He was bald. He owned a very expensive computer. He also owned a very CRAZY monkey called pig. Yes, PIG.

Stuart grew lazier and lazier. And one day, he grew so lazy that he couldn’t be bothered to use his computer any more so he gave it to pig.

But pig did not know how to do a space, but figured how to send an Email so sent one to Stuart saying ‘Howdoyoudoaspace?lovepig,thestupidmonkeyyougaveyourcomputerto.’

But Stuart didn’t reply.

Pig grew so ANGRY, that it got to the point when he thought his fuzzy little head was going to EXPLODE!!!

So, he chucked the computer of the desk!

In conclusion, monkeys should NOT ever, EVER be trusted with highly-expensive computers!!!

6 responses to “Why monkeys cant be trusted with highly expensive computers!”

  1. Kate Wilson says:

    Wow Trinity- I love your blog. It’s so clever and well composed and it made me laugh. Thank you

  2. William says:

    Hi Trinity this is William. I am 9 and I think your blog is the best one this week. It is really funny like David Waliams books which are my favourite. I am going to read all your blogs in 2018

  3. Andrew Paterson says:

    Hello Trinity,
    I have read many blogs on 100WC and I have to say yours really impressed me, Your story was very amusing and extremely well written. You clearly have an understanding about the power of punctuation which helped to make your story flow.
    There were a couple of spelling errors and I noticed you used ‘But’ quite a lot. Whilst a very useful word, you may find your writing quality improves if you try to find alternative words or phrases to express your point.
    Reading your piece leads me to believe you have a real literary talent. Well done.

  4. Mrs Addleton says:

    Trinity, you have such a talent! As you know, I have been so excited to read your blog and my goodness it was worth the wait. It made me laugh and, like all my favourite books, I didn’t want it to end. I can’t wait to hear more ideas that emerge from your special little note book. Love it!
    Mrs Addleton
    3 house points

  5. Mrs Dibben says:

    Oh Trinity this blog made me laugh. You have such a delightful writing style. I love the way you talk directly to the reader making them feel they are right there in the room with you.
    Great ending.

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