One day I was eating a SANDWICH and when I about to take my first bite it talked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I though it onto the floor. Don’t blame me I was scared, It was a talking sandwich!! Then it said ‘OWCH’. Then it said ‘hello’. Then I screamed like a girl.
But after a while I was fine about it. But then it said it was on low BATTTERY so I went to find some so it could be energetic.
so I HURRIED to the WHITE shop round the corner so that was a quite stressed day.
That was my blog today.
That DOES sound like a stressful day, Harvey. I wonder if Mrs Sandwich has some interesting things to say or needs your help to learn more English. I hope she doesn’t go mouldy before you return with her batteries.
Hello Harvey,
You have carefully woven the prompts into an original story. Your punctuation has improved this week too. Reading the first couple of sentences I think you may have missed out a word.
I like your blog a lot harvey
Hello Harvey,
It was a challenge to come up with a story that contained that eclectic collection of words but you managed it. Your idea of a talking sandwich was very amusing and made me smile.
You made good use of direct speech although remember that full stops have to be in the speech marks. You might be able to make the blog a bit more interesting by changing your sentence starters in your third paragraph – avoiding using the word ‘but’ twice in a row.
I hope you can revive Mrs Sandwich so that we can find out more about her history.
Mrs Addleton
1 house point.