is he actuly a man in a cloak or a real monster
does he like living in the woods
why does he live in the woods
has he been good or bad
is he just a man dressed up in a cloak
has he got a mask
The mystery man in a cloak!!!
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good one
I love the way you make people think about it. Great piece of work. Maybe you could check out our website:
Written in stone primary blogger
Gosh. I like the way you got me to think using your questions. The way you’ve written it; it could be seen as a poem I think. We’ll done
Very intriguing Peyton. I love the use of questions.
WOW Peyton,
I can tell that you really looked at the picture and thought hard about what or who this was. Although you didnt make up a story about the figure, you asked questions which made me use my own imagination to create my own story. I like the question “is he actually a man in a cloak or a real monster?” Most of the other bloggers assumed this was an evil character but you question this; he could in fact be a peaceful monk couldn’t he?
Remembering to use capital letters to start your sentences and question marks at the end of questions would really improve your blog next time. I’m looking forward to seeing more blogs from you.
Mrs Addleton
1 house point
Greetings Peyton from the USA. I really enjoyed your story about the Mystery Man. I believe the use of punctuation marks would have added to the impact of your tale. However, it was still a gripping recollection that fired the imagination of the reader. Well done!