forest lover

Posted by Kian B in 100wc | 6 Comments

I’ve only just seen this so I am  just going to tell you what I saw.      I saw him and took  a picture  of him but… he jumped all over me and I  found myself in the suit and I really loved being as creepy as the black figure.   I just caught myself in a bad situation, I had no clue where the real black THING was so I tried to escape out of the cloak but it was to late.

I was bleeding all over but  my torso was the worst.  I  was crying my eyes out until my mom and dad came.   They were  really scared so they called the police.  But what happened …?

6 responses to “forest lover”

  1. Mrs Venables says:

    Love the cliff hanger on the end Kian. You’ve used some amazing words to add to your writing. Looking forward to reading the next one :).

  2. Mrs Dibben says:

    Hello Kian, a very different interpretation. You always seem to come up with unique ideas. Great vocabulary.

  3. Well done Kian, you’ve done a great job with the prompt this week. You have described how scary it would be to get caught up in the suit really well. Keep up the great work.
    Ms. Brennock.
    Team 100 w/c

  4. Kate Wilson says:

    Wow Kuan, what creative thinking. I hope your parents called the ambulance next. I like the way you didn’t repeat “found myself” but chose “caught myself”. We’ll done

  5. Mrs Addleton says:

    Kian, it really took me by surprise when I read how you found yourself in the cloak; no one else in your group of budding bloggers thought of this idea! Although it is never good to be in a ‘bad situation’, I am relieved you read your blog aloud before publishing and so didn’t find yourself in a bed situation! You were thoughtful with your punctuation and it was a good idea to break up your blog into paragraphs. I like your choice of vocabulary for the word body; ‘torso’ was a much more interesting alternative.
    Well done Kian,
    From Mrs Addleton

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