Ghost city !!! ): …. ): ): ): ): ): ): ): ): ): ): ): ):

Posted by Elijah H in 100wc | 4 Comments

In all the streets, they have uncovered things that no one knows about.  This is a ghost city full of good and evil ghosts.  The good ghosts are trying to stop the bad ghosts and the bad ghosts are trying to rob banks.  However, the money is ghost money and not original money, it is see through for the ghosts to grab hold of.  Good ghost cops lured the robber ghosts into a money trap which is made of gold.  We need to get rid of the bad ghosts and their ghostly money, but where would we hide it all?                                                                                                                                              Thank you for reading this.

4 responses to “Ghost city !!! ): …. ): ): ): ): ): ): ): ): ): ): ): ):”

  1. Mrs Hillyar says:

    WOW! Well done Elijah this is fab 🙂

  2. Mrs Addleton says:

    Elijah, WOW your first ever blog! You really persevered with this; I know how hard you found it to get your ideas out but after sharing them with someone out loud, you got your blog finished and what’s more, in exactly 100 words!

    I also like your idea about ‘see through’ money as well as the golden money trap.

    I hope you enjoyed posting your first 100wc entry and I really look forward to reading the next one.

    Mrs Addleton

  3. Hannah says:

    Hi Elijah,

    I like your idea about good ghosts and bad ghosts- it’s very creative. You’ve also used commas effectively to help break sentences up and make them easier to read. I’m glad the good ghosts manage to trap the bad ones. I wonder what relationship these ghosts have with humans?

    Thanks for taking part in 100WC this week.
    Hannah (Team 100) -Birmingham, UK

  4. Kate Wilson says:

    I hope the good ghosts win Elijah. I like the idea of see through money just for ghosts. Maybe they would use it to buy see through sweets and see through clothes.

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