haunted town holiday!

Posted by George B in 100wc | Tagged | 4 Comments

Since I came into this town feelings of eeriness have been coming into my stomach. I feel this town is haunted. Mum said that this is going to be a ‘family’ holiday but its turning into a nightmare!¬† ¬†first I feel a cold hand on my back, then some thing falls of the shelf when no one was around and finally, some thing brushes past me when no one was there!!!!! its crazy , I need to sweet talk mum for us to go home because otherwise, this is the end of me…

4 responses to “haunted town holiday!”

  1. Mrs Summers says:

    A great first blog George. I am left wondering what will happen next and to be honest I would want to be going home with some of the description you have given. I look forward to reading your next blog.

  2. Mrs Taylor says:

    Oh my George scary!
    I hope it’s not the end of you!!
    Fabulous first blog.

  3. Jo says:

    Hi George,
    Wow this is brilliant. I like the way you make it feel creepy and that you tried to persuade your mum by sweet talking. You did a really good description. I want to read your blog next week.
    From Jo

  4. Mrs Addleton says:

    George,
    Congratulations on posting your first ever blog! I love the way you describe your uneasiness as a feeling in your stomach; I would certainly be nervous if I was shopping amongst these ghostly figures and unexplained objects were brushing against my skin. My children often have to “sweet talk” me to get out of a shopping trip but I think I would be getting away from that high-street as quickly as I could! You did well to post your blog in less than 10 minutes without time to go back and edit. I am really looking forward to reading more of your exciting blogs.

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