Ghost

Posted by Harvey C in 100wc | Tagged | 6 Comments

This is a ghost town or is it which county is it in if it is in your lock your doors a hide they look like normal people but are they. In the background that do not realize. Some of the lights are off , so you can see them, some of you will think that they are reflection but some of you will not. It looks like a busy town but most of them are ghosts and are sometimes invisible but in this picture we found them and it look like there heads are chopped off and are dead in our world…

6 responses to “Ghost”

  1. Mrs Summers says:

    I am really impressed that you were motivated to do this Harvey so well done! Some of your word choices and ideas make me look again at the picture. I look forward to reading your next blog.

  2. Josh McK says:

    Hi Harvey you were missing a lot of punctuation from your friend who you did it with Josh

  3. Mrs Taylor says:

    Harvey- well done for completing this in a short time.
    Your first blog!
    So next time think about creating a story or scene to hook the reader in. If they are sea in our world what are they doing here?? This could be a great story!
    I’d love to hear more…

  4. Avril says:

    Hello Harvey. I think you might be new to 100 wc and if so, this is a terrific first entry. You did a great job of using the picture prompt. I really like how you invite the reader to check the picture a second time and to notice all the things that I certainly didn’t notice at first glance. You’re right, I think there’s more to this picture than meets the eye. I see from Mrs. Addleton, you didn’t have much time to complete your piece of work, so I’m sure the next 100 wc will be even better. Take care to re read and edit. Well done.

  5. Jo says:

    Hello Harvey,
    I like your ideas but it took a while to work out what you meant because there were full stops and stuff missing and spellings that would have been useful. Are you going to blog another 100wc next week?
    From Jo

  6. Mrs Addleton says:

    Harvey,
    I agree that at first glance this looks like an ordinary precinct but you questioned the reader to take a second look and yes, there are headless, ghostly figures amongst the pedestrians! Perhaps they are reflections as you suggest or maybe the photographer has captured some real ghouls at this spooky time of year. I love shopping but would definately think twice about visiting this high-street! Well done – I know you only had 5 minutes or so to post your blog and you didn’t have time to edit.

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